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  • Dec. 31st, 2009 at 10:52 AM
observe and report
Seven of Wands

being aggressive
going after what you want
asserting yourself
taking the offensive
firing the first shot
fighting
making your point forcefully
seizing the advantage

being defiant
holding out against pressure
defending your position
opposing all challengers
combating criticism
refusing to yield
saying "No!"
resisting authority

showing conviction
being sure
having a fixed position
demonstrating strong character
standing up for what you believe
knowing you are right
acting resolutely
being firm

REINFORCING CARDS:

* Five of Wands - opposition, fighting
* Nine of Wands - defending your position, refusing to yield
* Five of Swords - conflict, "me-against-them" mentality

– Taken from this site.

NARUSE BABY WE'RE MEANT TO BE.


Right, so. The tarot card Seven of Wands is the way I see and will play Naoto. Tell me how I'm doing! I've never played a drama character before so any pointers and critique will be very helpful. Anon is on, comments are screened, post is up forever, etc.

Okay 'cept Naruse's comment cuz that needs to be public.

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  • Dec. 31st, 2009 at 10:30 AM
woobie ninja grin
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Serizawa on Naruse

  • Apr. 5th, 2009 at 7:12 PM
sometimes I'm not so sure
ANOTHER ESSAY.

It's come to my attention after Naruse came up in conversation with a few campers that I really should sort out just what Serizawa thinks of Naruse.

psychoanalysis time! )

DAMMIT ALWAYS TL;DR

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ESSAY TIME

  • Apr. 1st, 2009 at 10:16 PM
who let YOU out of the funhouse?
Whoo I love introspective character essays! I'm doing this mostly to help myself figure out his voice, character, issues, buttons etc. He changes and grows throughout the series, and even before all the mindfucky revenge homicide business started he was already a Special Bundle of Problems.

Serizawa in a nutshell - history/background analysis )

...Did I say nutshell? I'm a dirty liar.

Serizawa now (post-Ikehata) - SPOILER ALERT )

Basically, ALL YOU REALLY NEED TO KNOW is Naoto still has Daddy Issues, is still abrasive and slightly awkward with people, hardworking to a fault, outwardly aggressive when upset, and a little slow on the uptake, but he is more responsible, mature and generally a bit calmer.

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  • Mar. 29th, 2009 at 10:07 AM
x how do I fix this everything's wrong
Age: 25
Height: 173cm / 5'9
Weight: 58kg / 128lb
Medical Info: Lean, healthy young man.
Eyes: Black.
Hair: Black.
Physical traits: Lean, lanky, and sports the utilitarian I-just-don't-give-a-damn look of someone who spends many hours a day doing investigations and running around between crime scenes (quite literally): short cropped hair, button up outer shirt (always open), tank top, old baggy jeans and well-worn sneakers.
Abilities: Running any distance between station/car to crime scene (Expert). Roughing up suspects like a true Bad Cop though he never really means to (Intermediate). Investigating and detecting (Novice).

What's Okay To Mention Around Him: Pretty much everything except the very well-concealed, little-known fact that he stabbed a guy when he was 15. MORE BELOW.
Notes for the Psychics: Serizawa Naoto was bound for Fuckedupville. In middle school he had a dubious history of teen delinquency and bullying. As younger son and black sheep of the illustrious Serizawa house, his disapproving business tycoon father gave him severe lifelong Daddy Issues. And this was before The Incident happened.

[ DETAILED HISTORY ]

He and his 3 buddies were routinely roughing up a kid when the kid's friend Hideo stuck up for him. A skirmish ensued, during which Hideo was stabbed by a knife and died. The real tragedy is that there was no actual homicidal intention involved; Naoto held the knife against Hideo's chest as a bluff... and Hideo fell forward. Nevertheless, daddy took care of business and washed his son's hands clean with a lot of money, buying lawyers to write it off as a non-criminal homicide in the event of self-defense. Naoto was vindicated, and had to live with a heavy conscience for the rest of his life. Especially after he seemed to singlehandedly wipe out the victim's family; Hideo's mother died of grief, and his older brother who went missing shortly after was presumably dead.

[ / DETAILED HISTORY ]

So yes. In short, Daddy Issues, brief history of violence, TRUCKLOADS OF GUILT -> his tendency to overcompensate in his job.

Can I shapeshift/bodyswap/spit at/step on/etc?: Ask first, or I can't guarantee that Serizawa won't deck you.
Maim/Murder/Death: Some light maiming's fine, but nothing beyond that plzkthx :<
Hugging/Kissing/Other non-violent physical contact: HIGHLY ENCOURAGED. Awkward shounen retard is awkward and retarded and sorely deficient in loving touches.
Cooking: Probably can't handle anything more complex than Cup Ramen or instant noodles.

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  • Mar. 28th, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have a warrant for kicking your ass
fail cop get! )

92.2% (47 in, 4 out) I can has fail detective! Thanks everyone ♥♥♥

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